FMP production report 3


Here is the current progress of my comic following the previous page.

Dialogue to be included:

*Riley tries to recover from his coughing fit*

Soldier: Dying on your first day already? *offers a hand to help Riley up*

Riley: *finally stops coughing* Don’t joke about mortality, that actually nearly killed me!

Soldier: Oh lay off the drama, you have no idea what- *Riley accidentally pulls off his prosthetic arm*

The character Riley has always been eager to do his bit to protect Britain from the Xikaeda, motivated by little more than his sense of duty and enlistment propaganda. While Riley meets an experienced soldier for the first time he soon learns what war propaganda never shows: enlisting along with the potential cost of a crippled body or a crippled mind.


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